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                                                                                                Creative Writing Unit 3

The irrevocable memory of the first time that Becca and I met A’ndrea is almost impossible to write about. There are only a few laconic words that can describe that moment and even the meanings of those words do little justice expressing what we witnessed and felt that day. Becca and I had been staying in the city with my mom who was busy hosting a convention during the day and unable to keep a watchful eye over two recidivist teenagers all day long. We knew that normally she woke up around seven and wouldn’t be back until six that night. So we devised an inveigling plan. The next morning as my mom woke and began her daily routine she tip toed around the hotel room cautiously as not to wake us two peacefully sleeping angels, who truthfully under clandestine covers were fully clothed and quivering with adrenaline. As soon as we heard the click from the hotel door close, signally that my mom had left, we shot from our beds in a fury, throwing pillows and sheets in every direction. We didn’t waste a second to think about the approbation we knew we would never receive from my mom for what we were about to do, nor did we think about the debauch that would fall upon us if we got caught. We pushed these worries to the sides of our minds as we raced up the busy New York City streets trying to get to Penn Station as fast as our feet would carry us. Reaching the station, out of breath and nearly hyperventilating, we skipped down the concrete steps two at a time. There in the middle of the bustle we stone still in consternation. Which train did we take to get to Massapequa? We whirled around scanning each chart around us that seemed to change every time we blinked. Suddenly a voice boomed over the intercom “Last call for Long Island bound train to Massapequa, Track 7.” Becca and I looked at each other and smiled. We grabbed each other’s hand as we flew down into the terminal and on to the train as the doors quickly shut behind us. The lengthy ride ahead of us left us with plenty of time to commiserate over the punishments we knew my mom would exacerbate us with if she knew what we were up to. But as the train finally slowed and pulled into Massapequa every worry we had was washed away as we stepped off the train and ran straight for A’ndrea’s open arms as she stood there waiting for us like an angel with a sanguine smile on her face.